Good work team-
Spooze, did you have a post where you listed your team members and their jobs? I am also interested in the amount of time spent on your production pre, during, post.
I like the idea of inferred violence and gory operations through camera moves.
too many "yes master" references for a short.
Drawing and coloring was great!
voice overs worked well as did the lip sync
I enjoyed this. I like the character designs. I thought the story was funny. Making it in black and white was a good choice. The acting from ther Moho characters was fun.
You guys keep getting better. On your next cartoon, you might consider running music under the dialogue. Music always seems to liven up patches of dialogue.
Yeah, maybe I should put it in the format I had and just make it a .zip file. I think I'll do that soon. I just put it up on the web in small format so people could see it and not download to the desktop.
First, it's a bit distracting to have titles while the camera is panning. And secondly, it feels like it could be tightened up a bit. When we're at the walmart (or walmart rip off... LOL) and then we're headed to the mall, I just felt like "so, okay, move it along. We could have done without that last scene."
I did like the script - thought it was pretty funny. I also thought the animation was good, and was getting better and better.
Maybe for your next movie, try something completely different?