twisted tales 4
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- sargumphigaus
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twisted tales 4
Me and a YouTuber named Mr. X Dreams collaborated on a project. The first 15 minutes is him narrating a story audiobook style, which provides context for the conclusion which I animated. Just a warning. Things get intense towards the end. (people burning, bones getting broken, that sort of thing)
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Re: twisted tales 4
Very nicely done! I especially liked the animation sequences at 14:52, 15:02. And the story and mood were compelling. The first time I watched, I skipped ahead to the animation, but the animated portion made a lot more sense within the context of the narrated portion of the story. Great stuff!
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I tried to watch it, but 15 minutes of narration was too much for me. I don't think it can be justified as "context". For me, this needs some merciless editing. Sometimes you just have to throw away stuff you love. Sorry to be a bit negative...I don't know how to say it any other way.
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- sargumphigaus
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lol, what do i care. I didn't write it. I just did my part in the project, which was the animation at the end. I am but a mere cog in the machine. A symptom of another man's vision.jahnocli wrote:I tried to watch it, but 15 minutes of narration was too much for me. I don't think it can be justified as "context". For me, this needs some merciless editing. Sometimes you just have to throw away stuff you love. Sorry to be a bit negative...I don't know how to say it any other way.
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Sorry, I thought you said you "collaborated" -- now you're a cog in another man's machine? Doesn't sound like collaboration to me. LOL.sargumphigaus wrote:lol, what do i care. I didn't write it. I just did my part in the project, which was the animation at the end. I am but a mere cog in the machine. A symptom of another man's vision.jahnocli wrote:I tried to watch it, but 15 minutes of narration was too much for me. I don't think it can be justified as "context". For me, this needs some merciless editing. Sometimes you just have to throw away stuff you love. Sorry to be a bit negative...I don't know how to say it any other way.
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I got demoted for insubordination between then and now. They told me they didn't like me because I had too much swagger.
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Ha ha! Jeez. At least now I know why your stuff was just tacked on to the end...sargumphigaus wrote:I got demoted for insubordination between then and now. They told me they didn't like me because I had too much swagger.
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that's just the way the cookie crumbles, brother.
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Except for the complete beginners in animation, we all know how much time and effort it took to do the animation.
You know the longer I do animation the more 'swagger' I get.
Dale
You know the longer I do animation the more 'swagger' I get.
Dale