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Company logo.
My dad asked me to make him, his company loge in gif.
So i made one in twenty minuts:
click for SWF /\
What do you think?
So i made one in twenty minuts:
click for SWF /\
What do you think?
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Menorah...selgin wrote:how is named your dad's company?
nopeselgin wrote:does they design Flash's costumes?
btw, this is the logo, my dad is a programer, he just asked me to animate it.selgin wrote:i would eliminate the noisy blue lines, and maybe i'd make the logo a little less symetrical. the current is a little like the finishing 80's logos. i dont' know... do you remember OCP?
You need to learn that "less is more". This is migraine-inducing stuff, and the blue lines are a problem. Take a look at how cartoons use "bounce", ease-in and ease-out, anticipation and reaction. Even a simple thing like this could look really professional if the movement is right...
You can't have everything. Where would you put it?
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I just did what he asked me too...jahnocli wrote:You need to learn that "less is more". This is migraine-inducing stuff, and the blue lines are a problem. Take a look at how cartoons use "bounce", ease-in and ease-out, anticipation and reaction. Even a simple thing like this could look really professional if the movement is right...
My dad wanted the lines to be that way, and he said it was purfect whan i finished... (the animation i mean )
LOL!I just did what he asked me too...
My dad wanted the lines to be that way, and he said it was purfect whan i finished
Then why ask us for opinions?
Why the poll?
You have reduced the area of creative criticizm to such a narrow range... there isn't anything else to say.
If your client is happy you don't need any opinions.
I will add my 2 cents anyway... the logo bites... I'm indifferent about the animation quality... the horrible logo overpowers it.
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I just wanted to know, if it was good... ^_^heyvern wrote: LOL!
Then why ask us for opinions?
I just wanted to try it... O_oheyvern wrote:Why the poll?
Why? People said it sucks, np i couldent do anything else...heyvern wrote:You have reduced the area of creative criticizm to such a narrow range... there isn't anything else to say.
Why not? I allways take notes of peoples opinions...heyvern wrote:If your client is happy you don't need any opinions.
Thx for the honest opinion...heyvern wrote:I will add my 2 cents anyway... the logo bites... I'm indifferent about the animation quality... the horrible logo overpowers it.
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