Hi all - This is my first ever animation, used asp11 and inkscape to draw the characters/backgrounds. I realize there's lots of problems with lip syncing and over all character movements, but I've been having fun with the software and would appreciate any feedback
Cheers,
Mark
Re: A bit from Bill Burr
Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2016 5:43 pm
by synthsin75
The last bit ruined it for me. It was obviously a told story, so anchoring it back to the storyteller would have worked better. Until then, it goes to show that good story/audio goes a long way.
Re: A bit from Bill Burr
Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2016 6:41 am
by Jademunky
I really liked the animation, I thought the characters suited the feel of the movie. The audio is obviously great to work with but I think you reinforced it well with your visuals.
Re: A bit from Bill Burr
Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2016 4:32 am
by djwaterman
Yeah I liked it, the visuals added to the story, the character designs were solid.
Re: A bit from Bill Burr
Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2016 7:09 am
by Little Yamori
Nice Job, not only with the character expressions but the shot editing too
