Hi all! Here is my work in progress animatic. It is the beginning of the story I have been working on. It leaves off in the middle of the scene, but I wanted to test it on people who haven't seen it to get a sense if it's working. I'd love to have any suggestions or comments on what I have so far. I plan to take the video down in a few days. Thanks!
http://vimeo.com/33134713
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looks good to me so far!
I really like your character style - its really original but somehow familiar
Pro sounding audio really goes a long way too... good luck with the project - can't wait to see it all come together!
For the final piece, some quiet audio ambiance would really help with setting the scene too.
I really like your character style - its really original but somehow familiar
Pro sounding audio really goes a long way too... good luck with the project - can't wait to see it all come together!
For the final piece, some quiet audio ambiance would really help with setting the scene too.
Thank you all for the comments and suggestions! They will be very useful to me as I continue to work on this.
neon--I think I will continue on with the animatic for the rest of scene 1. But I also want to keep refining this portion to get the jokes to come through better. I'm hoping that getting more energy in the voice acting, some kind of music to accent certain moments, and better pacing will make it funnier.
neon--I think I will continue on with the animatic for the rest of scene 1. But I also want to keep refining this portion to get the jokes to come through better. I'm hoping that getting more energy in the voice acting, some kind of music to accent certain moments, and better pacing will make it funnier.