Short Frankenstein spoof
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Short Frankenstein spoof
Greetings all,
for your amusement:
life05c.mov
My apologies for all the surrounding advertisements.
Warning for headphone users: the sound is possibly a little loud.
Regards, Myles.
for your amusement:
life05c.mov
My apologies for all the surrounding advertisements.
Warning for headphone users: the sound is possibly a little loud.
Regards, Myles.
"Quote me as saying I was mis-quoted."
-- Groucho Marx
-- Groucho Marx
Very funny and refreshing
Sound effects and voice talent were very good, character animation was reasonable, staging was good, special effects were good, but not all of them.
FWIW I have some tips for improvement:
- flash-burning of the corpse needs much better SFX
- lip-synching is a bit off (or is this intentional?)
- the actor needs more abruptness in his movements
- a "gothic feeling" would make this anim look more authentic and thus strengthen the plot twist at the end
I hope you didn't mind my critique, it was meant to give positive input.
Sound effects and voice talent were very good, character animation was reasonable, staging was good, special effects were good, but not all of them.
FWIW I have some tips for improvement:
- flash-burning of the corpse needs much better SFX
- lip-synching is a bit off (or is this intentional?)
- the actor needs more abruptness in his movements
- a "gothic feeling" would make this anim look more authentic and thus strengthen the plot twist at the end
I hope you didn't mind my critique, it was meant to give positive input.
Thanks everyone!
Thanks RASH for your critique - I do appreciate the tips. I'm not sure I'll re-work this particular animation, but I'll keep your comments in mind for the next animation!
Agent - yes, sorry about that, Sorenson wasn't supported until at least Quicktime 5, I think - and I might have even used Sorenson 3.0, which wasn't supported until Quicktime 6.
Jorgy - I was wondering whether that would amuse anyone but me.
Regards, Myles.
Thanks RASH for your critique - I do appreciate the tips. I'm not sure I'll re-work this particular animation, but I'll keep your comments in mind for the next animation!
Agent - yes, sorry about that, Sorenson wasn't supported until at least Quicktime 5, I think - and I might have even used Sorenson 3.0, which wasn't supported until Quicktime 6.
Jorgy - I was wondering whether that would amuse anyone but me.
Regards, Myles.
"Quote me as saying I was mis-quoted."
-- Groucho Marx
-- Groucho Marx