dog like way... tell me..
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dog like way... tell me..
a basic cutout animation engineered in ASP6.
perhaps could have had a few more sound affects but i think i'm actually slightly happy with this one
see what you think and all comments are welcome... ta.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K93xAs2yKy4
perhaps could have had a few more sound affects but i think i'm actually slightly happy with this one
see what you think and all comments are welcome... ta.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K93xAs2yKy4
Re: dog like way... tell me..
Very nice, I like the style too.christopherjd wrote:a basic cutout animation engineered in ASP6.
perhaps could have had a few more sound affects but i think i'm actually slightly happy with this one
see what you think and all comments are welcome... ta.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K93xAs2yKy4
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---------------------SPOILER ALERT!!!-------------------
Okay, I thought I'd give some more specific feedback because the story and directing here are really well done.
First, there's suspense because the audience is wondering "Will he feel embarrassed/ashamed?" So emotionally, there is a lot at stake. This is heightened by the fact that it's ambiguous what's "normal." The fact that the dog exhibited some dog-like qualities (having a stick?) and that he wasn't wearing pants made me wonder if the accusations would unnerve him.
Another strength is that the characters' emotions and changing relationship dynamic are shown visually and audibly. For example, when the the man steps back and his voice falters.
And I like the topper that the man tries it again in a situation even less plausible than the first one (given where the characters are standing when he initiates the prank).
It appears to be very meticulously planned. Nice work!
Okay, I thought I'd give some more specific feedback because the story and directing here are really well done.
First, there's suspense because the audience is wondering "Will he feel embarrassed/ashamed?" So emotionally, there is a lot at stake. This is heightened by the fact that it's ambiguous what's "normal." The fact that the dog exhibited some dog-like qualities (having a stick?) and that he wasn't wearing pants made me wonder if the accusations would unnerve him.
Another strength is that the characters' emotions and changing relationship dynamic are shown visually and audibly. For example, when the the man steps back and his voice falters.
And I like the topper that the man tries it again in a situation even less plausible than the first one (given where the characters are standing when he initiates the prank).
It appears to be very meticulously planned. Nice work!
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uddhava, thanks and yes, i need to work on the sound recording and editing.. will take much more care on the next...
Iwaxana.. thanks for that, some good analysis there, tho i have to say i didn't think about it that much and the plan was a bit of an idea which kind of grew organically. Am working on a longer piece at the moment so I think i'll need to pay more attention to the planning aspects..
thanks again people...
Iwaxana.. thanks for that, some good analysis there, tho i have to say i didn't think about it that much and the plan was a bit of an idea which kind of grew organically. Am working on a longer piece at the moment so I think i'll need to pay more attention to the planning aspects..
thanks again people...
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again thanks..
slowtiger.. interested as to what you mean by 'elaborate on the visuals'? I know there are aspects as to the 'finishing' and that the dogs quick leg movement was weird. I did make a mistake there but when i reviewed it, it made me laugh and thought to leave it in.. I thought it adds to the rawness of it and i like that..
slowtiger.. interested as to what you mean by 'elaborate on the visuals'? I know there are aspects as to the 'finishing' and that the dogs quick leg movement was weird. I did make a mistake there but when i reviewed it, it made me laugh and thought to leave it in.. I thought it adds to the rawness of it and i like that..