Average Joe Goes Camping
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Average Joe Goes Camping
Hey everyone!
Just wanted to let you know that I have released a brand new animated short film called Average Joe Goes Camping.
This is the pilot for a web series I am creating chronicling the every day life of Joe and his family.
I should start making new episodes in March after Lucky Bob's Time Machine 2 is done. We currently have 2 more episodes written and are working on two more.
Anyway, enough chatter, enjoy the short and feedback is appreciated!
http://www.freewebs.com/jtn1989/average ... amping.htm
Thanks!
James
Just wanted to let you know that I have released a brand new animated short film called Average Joe Goes Camping.
This is the pilot for a web series I am creating chronicling the every day life of Joe and his family.
I should start making new episodes in March after Lucky Bob's Time Machine 2 is done. We currently have 2 more episodes written and are working on two more.
Anyway, enough chatter, enjoy the short and feedback is appreciated!
http://www.freewebs.com/jtn1989/average ... amping.htm
Thanks!
James
Hey guys, we were experiencing some technical difficulties but the movie is back up again!
http://www.freewebs.com/jtn1989/average ... amping.htm
http://www.freewebs.com/jtn1989/average ... amping.htm
I love this...(not being biased )
No seriously..this is a very good short. I love the way you used stereotypes for each character. And the spin added to the little sister is really funny. Is she possessed? Joe kind of reminds me of homer simpson lol
Great Short!
Dan
No seriously..this is a very good short. I love the way you used stereotypes for each character. And the spin added to the little sister is really funny. Is she possessed? Joe kind of reminds me of homer simpson lol
Great Short!
Dan
15 year old Anime Studio user...
27/12/06: Im back and ready to get creating again!!
27/12/06: Im back and ready to get creating again!!
Sounds great!spoooze! wrote:Thanks Dan! Glad you liked it.
You know what? I'm not quite sure if she is possessed or not... I think she is just an evil little child. I'll ask Brad. He was actually talking about an episode where we learn more about Susie's evilness.
Thanks!
James
15 year old Anime Studio user...
27/12/06: Im back and ready to get creating again!!
27/12/06: Im back and ready to get creating again!!
Man, that was too funny! The voices of the father and the goth rock son were perfect. Great writing too.
If I had one complaint, I would say that on the internet, long opening credits is really a bad idea. People will most certainly click away if they are not watching without a recommendation like from this group. You need to get right to the meat of it and let credits fall at the end.
I first saw this post yesterday when I was at work. I started watching and, as typical of work, having other things to do I clicked away during the credits. Now I am at home on Saturday and watched it and it was great. The kind of thing I would have shown around work if I had seen it all then. You gotta hook the viewer quickly and reel them in when dealng with the Youtube economy.
If I had one complaint, I would say that on the internet, long opening credits is really a bad idea. People will most certainly click away if they are not watching without a recommendation like from this group. You need to get right to the meat of it and let credits fall at the end.
I first saw this post yesterday when I was at work. I started watching and, as typical of work, having other things to do I clicked away during the credits. Now I am at home on Saturday and watched it and it was great. The kind of thing I would have shown around work if I had seen it all then. You gotta hook the viewer quickly and reel them in when dealng with the Youtube economy.
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I shortened the opening credits to only the title. Now you won't have to sit through a long opening:
http://www.freewebs.com/jtn1989/average ... amping.htm
http://www.freewebs.com/jtn1989/average ... amping.htm