Company logo.

CowsCanFly · Post by **CowsCanFly** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 12:02 pm

My dad asked me to make him, his company loge in gif.

So i made one in twenty minuts:

click for SWF /\

What do you think?

CowsCanFly · Post by **CowsCanFly** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 4:27 pm

no comments?

Well you hate me...

Post by **Víctor Paredes** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 5:04 pm

how is named your dad's company?
does they design Flash's costumes?

i would eliminate the noisy blue lines, and maybe i'd make the logo a little less symetrical. the current is a little like the finishing 80's logos. i dont' know... do you remember OCP?

CowsCanFly · Post by **CowsCanFly** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 5:42 pm

selgin wrote:how is named your dad's company?

Menorah...

selgin wrote:does they design Flash's costumes?

nope

selgin wrote:i would eliminate the noisy blue lines, and maybe i'd make the logo a little less symetrical. the current is a little like the finishing 80's logos. i dont' know... do you remember OCP?

btw, this is the logo, my dad is a programer, he just asked me to animate it.

jahnocli · Post by **jahnocli** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:06 pm

You need to learn that "less is more". This is migraine-inducing stuff, and the blue lines are a problem. Take a look at how cartoons use "bounce", ease-in and ease-out, anticipation and reaction. Even a simple thing like this could look really professional if the movement is right...

CowsCanFly · Post by **CowsCanFly** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:32 pm

jahnocli wrote:You need to learn that "less is more". This is migraine-inducing stuff, and the blue lines are a problem. Take a look at how cartoons use "bounce", ease-in and ease-out, anticipation and reaction. Even a simple thing like this could look really professional if the movement is right...

I just did what he asked me too...

My dad wanted the lines to be that way, and he said it was purfect whan i finished... (the animation i mean

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heyvern · Post by **heyvern** » Sun Aug 27, 2006 12:36 am

I just did what he asked me too...

My dad wanted the lines to be that way, and he said it was purfect whan i finished

LOL!

Then why ask us for opinions?
Why the poll?

You have reduced the area of creative criticizm to such a narrow range... there isn't anything else to say.

If your client is happy you don't need any opinions.

I will add my 2 cents anyway... the logo bites... I'm indifferent about the animation quality... the horrible logo overpowers it.

-vern

jahnocli · Post by **jahnocli** » Sun Aug 27, 2006 12:40 am

cowscanfly wrote:My dad wanted the lines to be that way, and he said it was purfect whan i finished... (the animation i mean)

Let's hope all your future clients are as supportive...

CowsCanFly · Post by **CowsCanFly** » Sun Aug 27, 2006 10:20 am

heyvern wrote: LOL!

Then why ask us for opinions?

I just wanted to know, if it was good... ^_^

heyvern wrote:Why the poll?

I just wanted to try it... O_o

heyvern wrote:You have reduced the area of creative criticizm to such a narrow range... there isn't anything else to say.

Why? People said it sucks, np i couldent do anything else...

heyvern wrote:If your client is happy you don't need any opinions.

Why not? I allways take notes of peoples opinions...

heyvern wrote:I will add my 2 cents anyway... the logo bites... I'm indifferent about the animation quality... the horrible logo overpowers it.
-vern

Thx for the honest opinion...

CowsCanFly · Post by **CowsCanFly** » Sun Aug 27, 2006 10:22 am

jahnocli wrote: Let's hope all your future clients are as supportive...

Yeah..

But what do you expect? it's my dad...

Company logo.

Is it good?

Company logo.