Hi all:
I think this short is excellent.
The timing is perfect. 10 point of 10.
http://atomfilms.shockwave.com/af/content/kleeman_mike
Regards,
Carlos Bergoglio
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TIMING IN A SHORT
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Awesome! I think the timing was a bit off in places (too quick at times?) but otherwise very good. I guess my disagreeing with the timing could be that it was cut to the pace of the music and the action looked a bit choppy in a few places, or it could just be Flash playback varies from machine to machine. But that really was the minority of the project. Other than that I totally agree. Very cool.
What I really liked was that they actually spent time editing! Almost unheard of in the Flash realm. There is where the timing really shines. The jokes play nicely because of the editing. The drawing, while crude, suits the whole feel and doesn't detract from the feel of the whole piece. And while the drawing may be crude, never once did I find myself wondering what was going on or what the characters were thinking/feeling.
Very cool! Thanks for sharing it!
What I really liked was that they actually spent time editing! Almost unheard of in the Flash realm. There is where the timing really shines. The jokes play nicely because of the editing. The drawing, while crude, suits the whole feel and doesn't detract from the feel of the whole piece. And while the drawing may be crude, never once did I find myself wondering what was going on or what the characters were thinking/feeling.
Very cool! Thanks for sharing it!
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