Gwendolyn - First Anime Studio Character

[JoelMayer]

For a fantasy project im building my first Anime Studio Character. so far i think she looks pretty nice

Any critique would be welcome

Thanks!

[jahnocli]

Looks good! The only change I'd make is to emphasise the curvature of the spine a little more. Her back is ramrod straight -- should be arched backwards a little at the bottom. IMHO.

[jonbo]

You know I love this character, but the perspective on her collar is a little off. I think the collar on the right( her right) should be a bit smaller or lower than the left. Also, I agree with jahnocli, baby needs back!

[JoelMayer]

okay, more like that?

i also made some switch layers for the mouth now. got a little trouble, because at the moment i always have to move the mouth layer that i activate on top otherwise it wont render even though its in a switch folder... strange...

but here you see her with an "L" mouth

[jonbo]

VERY NICE. Let us know if you need help on the switch layer problem. She is too beautiful to have a lisp.

[neeters_guy]

Pretty. Looks like Ariel's cousin? Can't wait to see more.

Only suggestion is MAYBE move her ears lower and forward, closer to the back of the jaw, and make her forehead less bulbous, like this:



(Hope you don't mind I used the file you posted earlier to demonstrate. I'll remove the image if you prefer.)

[JoelMayer]

Thanks for the suggestions, i think you're right about the forehead.

Still working on the character. I'm having trouble deciding on a nice design for medieval pants even though i looked at a lot of photographs.

i'll keep ya updated

[Poopee]

Forget about what they say, she's got huge knockers, she's perfect.

BOOOOOOBIES!!!!!

Heheh, great work!

Poop