Hi Everyone,
This week I tried a new setting.
I did all the drawing in AS, cause I like to be able to manipulate the points.
Enjoy!
http://fletchercomics.com/
New Episode of Fletcher; made as always on AS 5
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Re: New Episode of Fletcher; made as always on AS 5
Nice. I especially liked the voice acting.
One criticism. In my opinion, the mechanic should've determined which car was Fletcher's the moment Fletcher walked in, because the mechanic - having completed his trash forensics - would've possessed an eerie knowledge of the car owner's likely age and appearance.
Additionally, had the mechanic identified Fletcher on sight, the beginning would be snappier. If the mechanic would've said, "Oh, right, you're the one with the bucket of soda bottles in the back" the moment Fletcher walked in, you could've trimmed away approximately 14 seconds of somewhat tedious dialogue and gotten to the interesting back-and-forth exchange much sooner.
One criticism. In my opinion, the mechanic should've determined which car was Fletcher's the moment Fletcher walked in, because the mechanic - having completed his trash forensics - would've possessed an eerie knowledge of the car owner's likely age and appearance.
Additionally, had the mechanic identified Fletcher on sight, the beginning would be snappier. If the mechanic would've said, "Oh, right, you're the one with the bucket of soda bottles in the back" the moment Fletcher walked in, you could've trimmed away approximately 14 seconds of somewhat tedious dialogue and gotten to the interesting back-and-forth exchange much sooner.