do you like my characters?

dreeko13 · Post by **dreeko13** » Wed Oct 25, 2006 3:16 pm

work in progress

cast of my cartoon series

you like??

idragosani · Post by **idragosani** » Wed Oct 25, 2006 3:45 pm

Sorta South Park-ish, but not too much so... let's them in action!

Mikdog · Post by **Mikdog** » Wed Oct 25, 2006 6:51 pm

Dude, they ROCK! With the right kind of animation, they could be smoking. If you send me your MOHO or AS files, I'll animate one how I think they should be animated, and send it back to give you an idea. I'm thinking "ODD JOB JACK" kind of thing.

dreeko13 · Post by **dreeko13** » Wed Oct 25, 2006 7:34 pm

let's them in action!

thats the plan!

Dude, they ROCK! With the right kind of animation, they could be smoking. If you send me your MOHO or AS files, I'll animate one how I think they should be animated, and send it back to give you an idea. I'm thinking "ODD JOB JACK" kind of thing.

thanks for the appreciation and the offer but ive got a fair idea how i want it to go myself although whether i can get from my brain to the monitor is another thing!

Bones3D · Post by **Bones3D** » Wed Oct 25, 2006 7:49 pm

The bevel effect is a bit obvious, but otherwise not too bad.

Personally, I'd try putting more effort into manually generating appropriate shading effects rather than depending on it to always be automated.

dreeko13 · Post by **dreeko13** » Wed Oct 25, 2006 7:51 pm

Bones3D wrote:The bevel effect is a bit obvious, but otherwise not too bad.

Personally, I'd try putting more effort into manually generating appropriate shading effects rather than depending on it to always be automated.

i quite liked the bevel effect, it makes them look like biscuits

.....and i like biscuits

Mikdog · Post by **Mikdog** » Wed Oct 25, 2006 9:18 pm

Biscuits is good.

Dude, I LOVE your puppet avvie!

No, I'm not on e.

dreeko13 · Post by **dreeko13** » Wed Oct 25, 2006 9:42 pm

Mikdog wrote:Biscuits is good.

Dude, I LOVE your puppet avvie!

No, I'm not on e.

thanks,.... thats my favorite sock that is!

Genete · Post by **Genete** » Sat Oct 28, 2006 12:00 am

I will give you my very personal opinion. (I think it is what you want

) Hope it dont annoy you. If so, I'm sorry.

First of al, they are genial! Ready to action! But...

I feel that you have started with one of them and doing some variations create others. It is good for save work time but they loose personality.
You can also make changes in:
1) Skin color
2) Shoes
3) Mouth and eyes expression (shape)
4) Any one have a nose?

If they are part of a team, T-shits colot must be identical (see upper -left third one arms)

Please dreeko13, don't miss undestand me. They are great drawings. I really think you can do it better. Take your time.

Regards

patrick · Post by **patrick** » Sat Oct 28, 2006 2:40 am

Nice style....but it looks like the layer ordering on the arms and their sleeves needs a tweak.

No noses, but then neither has that Oban cartoon, and that looks great.