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Looking for feedback on my cartoon series web page...

Postby HG_DaGr8One » Mon Jul 09, 2018 5:22 pm

WELCOME, One and All!
Spread the word and come check out my webpage showcasing my crazy artistic visions.

My "name" is HAPPEE GO'LUCKEY "DaGr8One" bka H.G."Da'Gr8One"
The creator of a series of cartoon shorts entitled, A.M.B.S. (Adulterated M'fin' B.S.) As seen on the inter webs.

I'm a Virginia based newbie cartoonist, writer, character and logo designer, comic illustrator, short animation producer, and last but not least an independent "experienced" artist.

https://adulteratedmfinbs.weebly.com/
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Re: Looking for feedback on my cartoon series web page...

Postby synthsin75 » Mon Jul 09, 2018 8:44 pm

Profanity, here and on the site, instantly brands this is unprofessional/immature.
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Re: Looking for feedback on my cartoon series web page...

Postby jahnocli » Tue Jul 10, 2018 11:06 am

All that and Comic Sans too.
You can't have everything. Where would you put it?
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Re: Looking for feedback on my cartoon series web page...

Postby HG_DaGr8One » Wed Jul 11, 2018 5:46 pm

synthsin75 wrote:Profanity, here and on the site, instantly brands this is unprofessional/immature.

Thank you for checking it out and giving your feedback or lack there of...
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Re: Looking for feedback on my cartoon series web page...

Postby HG_DaGr8One » Wed Jul 11, 2018 5:52 pm

jahnocli wrote:All that and Comic Sans too.

So, what about the Comic Sans font?
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Re: Looking for feedback on my cartoon series web page...

Postby synthsin75 » Wed Jul 11, 2018 7:01 pm

Yep, immature.
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