Anime Style Short - Please Critique

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Anime Style Short - Please Critique

Postby vealti » Fri Jun 08, 2018 3:33 pm



I'm finally done with my test project! My goal was to see how close I could get to an anime style and feel using Moho. I would appreciate some honest feedback on that and just the animation in general. Don't worry about offending me! I'm OK if you don't like it and tear it apart, I only ask that you tell me why. Also, any advice for improvements are always appreciated. I'm evaluating what works, what doesn't work on this for possible future projects.

Thanks, Tim
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Re: Anime Style Short - Please Critique

Postby dkwroot » Sun Jun 10, 2018 5:36 am

The inbetweens for the head turns are jumpy. Try to either remove frames between them or add in more inbetweens to smooth things out. I would recommend easing out of each turn. Also, when doing a head turn you almost always want your character to close their eyes and tilt their head slightly down during the turn. This will keep your character rigs from having a weird doll look.
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Re: Anime Style Short - Please Critique

Postby vealti » Mon Jun 11, 2018 6:05 pm

Thanks for the tips dkwroot!
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