Tales of the peasant cock!

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Tales of the peasant cock!

Post by ekadam » Mon Apr 17, 2017 8:36 pm

hi all !
here is my new tale , tales about peasant cock !
created with moho, and photoshop!
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Re: Tales of the peasant cock!

Post by jahnocli » Mon Apr 17, 2017 10:21 pm

Errmm... A number of emotions hit me after viewing this. Firstly, from the commentary syntax, I'm guessing that English is not your first language. When that is the case, people often have less inhibitions about using forthright expressions, as you do. So this is too 'adult' for children; but, on the other hand, it is rather too childish for adults. There is not so much a story as a sequence of odd events that peter out, so these things make this production difficult to like.

I have other comments, but I'm going to stop there, because they are all negative. I'd really like to be more positive -- usually I try to keep my mouth shut if I don't like something, but for some reason I felt compelled to react.
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Re: Tales of the peasant cock!

Post by JanR90 » Mon Apr 17, 2017 11:11 pm

Hi, i like the style, the map, the colors, characters, music, sounds, animations... but whats the point? it has to be funny? or something ecological? :D btw, how u do the narrator? it is a program? :?:
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Re: Tales of the peasant cock!

Post by ekadam » Tue Apr 18, 2017 12:31 am

thx for the feedbacks :D

first of all, i am sorry for my low english skills!

the idea was for this tale: make some asinine pointless story, because the location of the tale is asinine shire! so the tale's narrator is also asinine, if you know what i mean! lol
so i thought that i dont call help for the english translation.

this is new genre guys! the asinine tales!
maybe i am asinine too :D but hey , this is my style!

->for JanR90 - the narrator which i used you can check here : http://www.textaloud.com/
you can choose many voice type , i used the English, Britihs / Brian one !
and thx for you like the things in the animation.
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Re: Tales of the peasant cock!

Post by funksmaname » Tue Apr 18, 2017 2:37 am

This needs to be marked as NSFW.

Although I didn't find the bits that are supposed to be funny funny, I quite liked the use of music and the voice itself combined with bad English is quite funny. The overall timing isn't bad, I don't normally watch videos like this to the end (and came close to turning it off in the middle) but other than the pointless low brow unnecessary vulgarity, there is something here.

It always upsets me when people with the obvious talent and ability to make something interesting waste it on content like this. That is why I felt compelled to comment. You really shouldn't waste your time and potential trying to 'shock' interest into, potentially, otherwise good work.
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Re: Tales of the peasant cock!

Post by Gaenhart » Tue Apr 18, 2017 8:33 am

I like the style of your animation.
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Re: Tales of the peasant cock!

Post by JanR90 » Tue Apr 18, 2017 4:47 pm

ekadam wrote:thx for the feedbacks :D

first of all, i am sorry for my low english skills!

the idea was for this tale: make some asinine pointless story, because the location of the tale is asinine shire! so the tale's narrator is also asinine, if you know what i mean! lol
so i thought that i dont call help for the english translation.

this is new genre guys! the asinine tales!
maybe i am asinine too :D but hey , this is my style!

->for JanR90 - the narrator which i used you can check here : http://www.textaloud.com/
you can choose many voice type , i used the English, Britihs / Brian one !
and thx for you like the things in the animation.
Thanks man! :) I see you "Roma viccek" video on youtube, and even though I do not understand Hungarian (only a few words), i understood the joke :D :D :D (iam from Slovakia)
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Re: Tales of the peasant cock!

Post by ekadam » Tue Apr 18, 2017 8:51 pm

haha :D ! hello neighbour! i am glad you understood that joke :D
jokes are greats i think. in my joke you can see pretty bad animation but not bad views! everyone loves jokes! i seen your youtube chanell too it's pretty cool joke chanell, keep up the good work,
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Re: Tales of the peasant cock!

Post by djwaterman » Wed Apr 19, 2017 7:55 am

I really liked the look, the character designs, the shot planning and composition, color palate, there's a lot to like, but I found the actual animation too limited, it would've been nice to see those characters move more. Actually if you re-scripted and removed the swearing, I think you'd have a good little surreal fairy tale going on as there is some sort of Yin and Yang thing happening.
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Re: Tales of the peasant cock!

Post by JanR90 » Wed Apr 19, 2017 4:18 pm

ekadam wrote:haha :D ! hello neighbour! i am glad you understood that joke :D
jokes are greats i think. in my joke you can see pretty bad animation but not bad views! everyone loves jokes! i seen your youtube chanell too it's pretty cool joke chanell, keep up the good work,
Thanks man! :) you too!
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