Hi all - This is my first ever animation, used asp11 and inkscape to draw the characters/backgrounds. I realize there's lots of problems with lip syncing and over all character movements, but I've been having fun with the software and would appreciate any feedback
Cheers,
Mark
A bit from Bill Burr
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Re: A bit from Bill Burr
The last bit ruined it for me. It was obviously a told story, so anchoring it back to the storyteller would have worked better. Until then, it goes to show that good story/audio goes a long way.
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Re: A bit from Bill Burr
I really liked the animation, I thought the characters suited the feel of the movie. The audio is obviously great to work with but I think you reinforced it well with your visuals.
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Re: A bit from Bill Burr
Yeah I liked it, the visuals added to the story, the character designs were solid.
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Nice Job, not only with the character expressions but the shot editing too
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