My latest cartoon...9/11 Reptilians

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Daners
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My latest cartoon...9/11 Reptilians

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BFpsdQijAK4

Enjoy! Let me know what you think!
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Re: My latest cartoon...9/11 Conspiracy Guy

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It was funny, but the presentation was kind of pedestrian. What about moving the viewpoint now and then -- some close-ups of faces, big close-ups of panic-stricken eyes or a finger jabbing the elevator buttons? It was all a bit like a stage performance.
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Re: My latest cartoon...9/11 Conspiracy Guy

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Thanks for the input, maybe I will consider that next time around...
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Jahnocli's right. However, you can get away with a "stage" performance if there's a lot of good character animation, but with this minimal style you'd need to speed up the pacing a lot (notice how fast South Park is) or you start noticing the lack of full animation.

And NEVER show just a tiny part of the character on the screen (the guy on the left's arm). Zoom in a bit more or just move him.

Lots of potential though. :)
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Another point for me to consider...thanks.
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Re: My latest cartoon...9/11 Conspiracy Guy

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Hi. So many things can happen in elevators :)
The guy from the other side.
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