Hello,
Would like to share with you my first animation done in anime studio. Hope you will like it and give me some criticism
Here it is
https://youtu.be/KWFIQYQKl6E
Cheers!
Some criticism on my animation
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- jezjones29
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Re: Some criticism on my animation
I liked it. Maybe make him blink? Would be good to see some more motion in his hair when he moves too.
Re: Some criticism on my animation
I am glad to hear that you liked it .
Hmm additional movements sounds like good idea. I just wanted to ask if it's clear that second character is tube infalable man.
Hmm additional movements sounds like good idea. I just wanted to ask if it's clear that second character is tube infalable man.
- jezjones29
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Re: Some criticism on my animation
I think it's obvious, but he really needs a few more bones to make him look correct - he looks a little stiff.
Watch this cool vid from Víctor Paredes to see how to rig him:
viewtopic.php?t=15647
Watch this cool vid from Víctor Paredes to see how to rig him:
viewtopic.php?t=15647
Re: Some criticism on my animation
Some interaction between the two would be more engaging (eg, the guy imitating some of the inflatable's movements).
You can't have everything. Where would you put it?
Re: Some criticism on my animation
Actually I didn't think about that. It seems to be a good idea. I wanted a middle part to emphasize interaction between boy and inflatable man. Thanks for your feedback