I am new to cartoon animation, and I am far from being a good animator. So, here is my first project; it might make Pixar puke, but it's the best I can do (for now).
I am trying to create an animated series featuring science related toys for http://www.sciencetoy.org/
I owe a special thank you, to Victor Paredes for the School Days Content Pack and DK Toons for the American flag, as well as all who have contributed to Amime Studio.
Constructive criticism is appreciated, but lies telling me how great I did, is even more appreciated.
Ron Brown
First Cartoon (Science Related)
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Re: First Cartoon (Science Related)
nice work with interesting story. I just find a bit strange the difference of graphic style between professor and pupils. But, why not.
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Re: First Cartoon (Science Related)
Thank you for the compliment.exobunker wrote:nice work with interesting story. I just find a bit strange the difference of graphic style between professor and pupils. But, why not.
The children, as well as the bus and exterior of the school were purchased from Smith Micro (the "Anime Studio School Days Content Pack").
The Professor is my creation, and is my first character starting from a blank screen. this is the reason that the mismatch.
As I have found out creating and rigging an original character is very difficult and time consuming (at least for me right now), so I will have to use stock characters whenever I can.
Re: First Cartoon (Science Related)
I like this. A great use of the Anime characters and I really like the Picture-in-Picture stuff.
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Re: First Cartoon (Science Related)
Since you are using so much of the pre-designed content I would've probably tried to make my character resemble the other designs, you know, solid colors without outlines. Too late now though. Good luck with the enterprise.