Cartoon: Little Red Riding Brat

spoooze! · Post by **spoooze!** » Thu Dec 08, 2005 1:27 am

Here's the latest cartoon creation from Hiya Animation!
It's called "Little Red Riding Brat" and it's a spoof of "Little Red Ride Riding Hood".
NO! I DID NOT get my idea from that DREADFUL looking film "Hoodwinked". UUUUGH!

Little Red Riding Brat

I put some squash and stretch into the chracters to make them look more alive. I got that idea from "Chicken Little".

Enjoy!

James :taz:

red hamster · Post by **red hamster** » Thu Dec 08, 2005 3:09 pm

I liked it.

jorgy · Post by **jorgy** » Thu Dec 08, 2005 5:40 pm

***Warning: Spoiler***

No offense, but I'm kinda tired of that bob guy....

But as far as the animation goes, it is definitely getting better and better.

As far as the storytelling goes, it starts out great, and gets me involved, but then I always feel a bit gyped. Maybe you should start working at the end, and then work towards the beginning? Then maybe you should get the urge to get it "out the door" and it won't affect the ending of the story.

spoooze! · Post by **spoooze!** » Thu Dec 08, 2005 7:02 pm

lol no offense taken. I'm working on re-designing Lucky Bob and making him a better character.
Any suggestions?

Yeah, I agree. The end was kinda quick. I was really rushed. I had to turn it in as a school project.

James

CrAzY Dan · Post by **CrAzY Dan** » Fri Dec 09, 2005 8:42 pm

The animation is great! I loved it.

It was a bit rushed at the end though.

Well done spoooze!

Dan

spoooze! · Post by **spoooze!** » Sat Dec 10, 2005 5:02 am

Thanks Dan

BTW I am sending you animation on DFA...
James