my first animation

voozel · Post by **voozel** » Fri Jan 17, 2014 11:07 pm

this is my first try lol..i know it needs more work but i just got sick of it and wanted to move on to the next one

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jivrnAN-iF4

Danimal · Post by **Danimal** » Fri Jan 17, 2014 11:10 pm

Sort of an abrupt ending there, but like you said you gave up on it. Cute characters and some good animation going on. My favorite was the orange-dressed one on the far right. Looking forward to more of your work!

CraftyGrafty · Post by **CraftyGrafty** » Fri Jan 17, 2014 11:14 pm

voozel wrote:this is my first try lol..i know it needs more work but i just got sick of it and wanted to move on to the next one
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jivrnAN-iF4

LOVE IT!
It's cute, funky, fun, and weird.

There's no harm in taking a break cos when you come back to it you'll have plenty of new ideas. The last thing you want is for you to get bored of it and push yourself to finish it cos you'll just want to finish it and it won't have the quality it deserves cos you've rushed it.

Take your time and enjoy yourself!

Maestral · Post by **Maestral** » Sat Jan 18, 2014 1:20 am

This is an excellent start. You should finish it, cause the only thing you could lose will be time, but time would pass anyway ,) On the other hand, I see that time as an investment in the next and better animation. You have a grip, don`t lose it.

voozel · Post by **voozel** » Sat Jan 18, 2014 2:22 am

Thanks guys glad u liked it ..
And i stopped this one because i've benn doing all tutorials, playing around, experience, basics..etc on the same scene lol thats why i got sick of it

hopefully my next one will be better .

MrSoHot · Post by **MrSoHot** » Sat Jan 18, 2014 3:15 am

Wow, pretty advanced for your first animation. Atleast it's advanced to me because I'm not very good. But seriously, awesome, I subscribed look forward to more.

SvenReyter · Post by **SvenReyter** » Sat Jan 18, 2014 3:39 am

Nice animation. It worked really well with that song.

Yosemite Sam · Post by **Yosemite Sam** » Sat Jan 18, 2014 5:22 am

I thought this was fantastic for your first animation!

slowtiger · Post by **slowtiger** » Sat Jan 18, 2014 10:51 am

You got me when the big green head get to the left - I like this muppet-like "bopping"! And then the dancing girl - perfect. You've got a talent for rhythm and dynamic movements, and all these characters are appealing, despite some not so good design choices. Left me grinning.

HanglideProductions · Post by **HanglideProductions** » Mon Jan 20, 2014 5:36 am

for your first animation that was really good the timing was very well done that "i got sick of it" attitude is probably the hardest part of animation to overcome anything can be accomplished with patients then again i tend to do the same thing so i really don't have room to talk well done though

Greenlaw · Post by **Greenlaw** » Mon Jan 20, 2014 6:45 am

That was fantastic! It put a big smile on my face. Thanks for sharing that.

sargumphigaus · Post by **sargumphigaus** » Tue Jan 21, 2014 6:24 am

for a first time animation, i would assume that you've been doing this your whole life. You move your characters with perfect rhythm and maintain qualities that make me jealous. If you're not passionate about this project enough to finish it, that's fine, but keep animating. You appear to be extremely good at it.

voozel · Post by **voozel** » Tue Jan 21, 2014 2:04 pm

Thanks a lot guys

...glad you liked it and sorry i stopped lol i know its the worst thing an animator can do .. Hopefully my next one will be full and better

drichird · Post by **drichird** » Tue Jan 21, 2014 9:04 pm

Crazy good for a first animation, crazy good even for an experienced animator, you have some crazy talent! As someone else said, it is "weird" in a good way, to me because it is so well done and conveys an other world type of strangeness, but using innocent yet weird (and ghostly) looking aliens and music. I thought the choreography was excellent, music and visuals synch perfectly, everything moves to the beat of the music just right. Of the 3 small ones, I especially like the way the middle alien wiggles it's tushee, and the design of the other 2 (ghostly and robotic). Also the art and lighting effects of big alien's kaleidoscope eyes. Also the "beam me down" beam which matches a stage curtains opening.

Something (wrinkles?) appears below the mouth of the big one around 0:22 which I did not understand.

You have great talent, please continue, would love to see more.

voozel · Post by **voozel** » Tue Jan 21, 2014 10:20 pm

drichird wrote:Crazy good for a first animation, crazy good even for an experienced animator, you have some crazy talent! As someone else said, it is "weird" in a good way, to me because it is so well done and conveys an other world type of strangeness, but using innocent yet weird (and ghostly) looking aliens and music. I thought the choreography was excellent, music and visuals synch perfectly, everything moves to the beat of the music just right. Of the 3 small ones, I especially like the way the middle alien wiggles it's tushee, and the design of the other 2 (ghostly and robotic). Also the art and lighting effects of big alien's kaleidoscope eyes. Also the "beam me down" beam which matches a stage curtains opening.

Something (wrinkles?) appears below the mouth of the big one around 0:22 which I did not understand.

You have great talent, please continue, would love to see more.

Lol thank you dude

.. And the mouth thingy is "F" or a lip bite but it didn't work well lol
And i am a HUGE fan of Aliens and cartoons haha thats why i am getting into animation and my goal is to end up an animator or producer at cartoon network or something

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