11 Seconds Club - MrMoi2000

[mrmoi2000]

Finished 41 out of 110. Still scoring around 4.6 for the most part (except my first one which was lower).

http://www.11secondclub.com/competition ... try/rDGlBT

[mrmoi2000]

Here is my Jan 2014 WIP: (still tweaking it)



(It's taken from the Star Trek reboot.)

[Danimal]

(It's taken from the Star Trek reboot.)

Which is an instant strike against it, but you did great with the animation, and the visual punchline. Loved the touch of the occasional spit. Very nice work!

[mrmoi2000]

I have an alternate version I have been messing with as well:

[jahnocli]

The alternative version has a lot more possibilities! The ending is rather laboured at present -- you can see the joke pretty quickly.

[Danimal]

The absurdity of the second one makes it much funnier. Why is this guy in a kid's ride? Why is there a stewardess on a kid's ride? It makes no sense and adds a sillier sense of humor to it.

[mrmoi2000]

Played with end shot:

[mrmoi2000]

The absurdity of the second one makes it much funnier. Why is this guy in a kid's ride? Why is there a stewardess on a kid's ride? It makes no sense and adds a sillier sense of humor to it.

She's a crazy stewardess, likes to go around making people sit down wherever she is.

[neeters_guy]

Ha ha, well done. I like the first one. I'd consider changing that camera switch on the stewardess as it's jarring when she's facing left than suddenly facing right. But overall very enjoyable.

This is like your 6th or 7th entry now in less than a year? You're a machine, man.

[mrmoi2000]

So, I finished in about the same place for January's. 49 out of 103 it says but more like 155 or so I think because of all the ties. I had a bit of an issue when I encoded it for there site into H.264 which added some blurryness to some of the motions. So I don't think that helped my score much.

This is the final version before re-encoding (no blurryness):


I have been working on this month's (Dave Foley and Phil Hartman from NewsRadio):


enjoy.

[Danimal]

Kind of an unexpected twist, I liked it!

[jahnocli]

Eeuw!

[Waan]

i loved the cats reaction at the end, very nice

[mrmoi2000]

I wanted to play with render types and style so I made a second one again:

[Danimal]

The pure look of unwavering joy on the guard's face makes this fun to watch.