11 Second Club entry by neeters_guy

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11 Second Club entry by neeters_guy

Post by neeters_guy » Thu Jul 11, 2013 8:09 pm

This is my second 11 Second Club entry since last November. I got to use smart bones quite extensively for the elbows and knees movements. Great feature.



Hope you enjoy and comments welcome.
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Re: 11 Second Club entry [July 2013]

Post by Imago » Fri Jul 12, 2013 7:57 am

So good! :D It reminds me somehow the Smurfs...
I love the "bouncy" girl! :P
Sorry for my bad english... Q_Q
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Re: 11 Second Club entry [July 2013]

Post by DK » Fri Jul 12, 2013 10:24 am

Great work neeters_guy!!!
Did you do the background in AS as well? It looks hand painted.

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Re: 11 Second Club entry [July 2013]

Post by neeters_guy » Fri Jul 12, 2013 8:33 pm

Imago wrote:So good! :D It reminds me somehow the Smurfs...
I love the "bouncy" girl! :P
Heh, I hadn't thought of Smurfs, but I do admire Peyo's art style.
DK wrote:Great work neeters_guy!!!
Did you do the background in AS as well? It looks hand painted.
I created the background in ArtRage, a swell natural media program. Honestly, it's a lot looser than I like. I did it as a placeholder, but it's probably good enough for this contest.

Thanks for comments. I'll post the results next month.
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Re: 11 Second Club entry [July 2013]

Post by Mikdog » Sat Jul 13, 2013 10:26 pm

nice!
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Re: 11 Second Club entry [July 2013]

Post by beachbumlarry » Sun Jul 14, 2013 7:07 am

I like it... Excellent work! :D
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Re: 11 Second Club entry [July 2013]

Post by neeters_guy » Mon Jul 15, 2013 6:50 am

Wow, thanks mikdog and beachbumlarry. That means a lot coming from such great animators.

One suggestion I received was to address "twinning". I redid some of poses to be more asymmetrical, as best as I could anyway (I really should create another view, but... :oops:).

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Re: 11 Second Club entry [July 2013]

Post by neeters_guy » Mon Aug 12, 2013 8:22 pm

Results are in. Actually scored lower this time. I think I study up on making better acting choices next time. :oops:

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Re: 11 Second Club entry [July 2013]

Post by shift » Tue Aug 13, 2013 12:37 am

Excellent work
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Re: 11 Second Club entry [July 2013]

Post by mrmoi2000 » Thu Aug 15, 2013 12:20 am

Yeah Neeters, they are a little tough over there. Even the top ones were only getting like 6's and 7's. I went ahead and did one, ended up about where I expected. Actually just glad to crack top 100.




Been slowly working on this month's.
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Re: 11 Second Club entry [July 2013]

Post by lwaxana » Thu Aug 15, 2013 3:54 am

Nice one! Great character designs as always and I like the way she moves to avoid his arm gestures.
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Re: 11 Second Club entry by neeters_guy

Post by neeters_guy » Tue Aug 27, 2013 2:42 am

Thought I'd put all my 11 Second Club entries in one thread. Here's one for Aug. 2013.



I did this in 9.5 and I got to experiment using smart bones to create slight shifts in head movement, both vertical and horizontal.
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Post by Danimal » Tue Aug 27, 2013 1:38 pm

Very realistic movement. There was one moment where the woman's head sort of squishes and then stretches - that really added some dynamics to this. Well done!
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Re: 11 Second Club entry [July 2013]

Post by Danimal » Tue Aug 27, 2013 1:40 pm

mrmoi2000 wrote:I went ahead and did one
I like both the "lineless" animation style and especially the guys on the side with their tongues hanging out. Always a funny visual. Good job!
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Re: 11 Second Club entry by neeters_guy

Post by neeters_guy » Thu Sep 05, 2013 10:29 pm

Results. I'm a little disappointed...my score is getting lower each time, but the feedback gives me good idea what I need to work on: Too stiff, too pose-to-pose, needs followthru and overlapping action, and less mechanical timing.

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Incidentally, mrmoi2000 entry did well: http://www.11secondclub.com/competition ... try/TjTef7 Congrats!
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