First Animated Comedy Short

[HangmanSi]

Hi all

Just under a year ago I purchased the debut version on AS7, and started learning how to use it pretty much just from the manual that came with it. I aspire one day get into comedy writing, but wanted to also get into animation to use as a vehicle for the content. It has been a long year of getting to grips with the basics, and am now using the pro version of AS9.

But I am happy to have finally produced a piece of work, titled 'The Night Before Christmas', using AS. It would mean a lot to me for the members of this board to watch the video and give me their feedback or opinions, good or bad, about the quality of it.

Warning, the content is very much NSFW due to some of the language in the script. If anyone enjoys it or finds it funny, then it would be great if you could tell others about it.

Thanks

HangmanSi

The Night Before Christmas - Part 1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z2M-OkuJhCc

[Artpen]

Good comedy writing, I enjoyed that!

Funny stuff and good amimating, well done

[AmigaMan]

Are you from Walsall?

There's some really good work in there. Santa's sleigh being pulled by the reindeer works very well. The artwork is very good also. Some more animation during the delivery of dialogue would improve it a lot but the economy of talking heads is fine if that's all you have time for. It's not really my type of humour, but that's a personal thing. As a way of getting your idea's 'out there' I would say this is a good start. I watched it all the way through which is a good sign

[HangmanSi]

Yes, I am originally from the Walsall area...

...I see my attempts at hiding my accent failed.

[AmigaMan]

Haha, I only noticed on the snowmen. My wife is from Bloxwich so I recognised the accent immediately

Anyway, I look forward to your next work as this is a great start.

[GarysTheatre]

I enjoyed this. Nice work.

[kaushalsingh]

It is really funny Made me laugh!
Good job