*School Daydream (this is for bupaje!)

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*School Daydream (this is for bupaje!)

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Well its almost that time when people go back to school, college.. or even university and i thought i would make an animation for that audience.. and bupaje.

You can watch it on cribble.tk

or at newgrounds.com (which it recently got front page).

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Ha ha! Nice idea...
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Post by mr. blaaa »

huhaha. thank god i neednt go to school anymore :lol:
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Niiiiice!
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Post by Karpi »

Just niiice! Veeery visual! Yippee!
The gag was a bit old but the overall made of the several shots and sounds and (again) the visual quality is strong - man!

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Post by jorgy »

Hey Cribble,

I really liked your idea, the music you picked, and especially your choice of shots. The you used the widescreen size very well in each one, and I liked the variety of angles you used. I especially liked the panning over up surfboard and over to the guy. It was visually interesting from a cinematography point of view, to add to the overall feeling of the clip.

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p.s. The stars at the end were cute. Oh yeah, the credits on the iPod thing were creative! I liked it all!
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Post by kdiddy13 »

Ha! Great stuff.

Wow, I have to say since we've all started posting on this board, you've really improved quite a bit! I'm really impressed and looking forward to seeing just where you'll go.

Nice job.
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Post by pintman »

I like its minimalistic style at the first sequence with the blue walls of the school. Even the rotation around the head at the beach was really impressive.
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Post by bupaje »

Hey, this is really well done! I enjoyed it a lot. The music and scenes all fit really well.

Cool -and thanks for the message. I'll beware of lockers. ;)
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Post by cribble »

Sorry for being absent here, just got back from Reading Festival (Iron Maaiiiiiideen)!

Thanks to everyone for the comments... i think this animation has definitly given me some good experience in the "keyframe, inbetween, keyframe" method i've read about.

i didn't realise this but i've just hit my 100k views over on newgrounds.com so i'll be celebrating with a good nights sleep.

once more, thanks to everyone for commenting.
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Post by fulg0r3 »

some more comments here: the video is really cool! like jorgy said, it's got a professional touch - regarding cuts, camera movement, the colours you picked n'stuff. i also liked the music very much, and the sound effects you used when the headphone drops of and the camera gets near to it again.

but it lacks a bit in terms of "decoration", like more complex backgrounds, detail in the character etc.
i'm working on a longer animation, too, so i know the hours of work it requires, but i found that some attractive backgrounds can allow you to reduce animation to the minimum and still give the viewer the feeling of "having something to see" - same with detailed characters. and you don't even need to animate that "structural" stuff!

well, whatever. nice work, and i'm looking forward to what you come up with next time!
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Post by NeepNop »

well done!
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