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Gwendolyn - First Anime Studio Character
Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 5:46 pm
by JoelMayer
For a fantasy project im building my first Anime Studio Character. so far i think she looks pretty nice
Any critique would be welcome
Thanks!
Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 5:49 pm
by jahnocli
Looks good! The only change I'd make is to emphasise the curvature of the spine a little more. Her back is ramrod straight -- should be arched backwards a little at the bottom. IMHO.
Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 5:56 pm
by jonbo
You know I love this character, but the perspective on her collar is a little off. I think the collar on the right( her right) should be a bit smaller or lower than the left. Also, I agree with jahnocli, baby needs back!
Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 6:04 pm
by JoelMayer
okay, more like that?
i also made some switch layers for the mouth now. got a little trouble, because at the moment i always have to move the mouth layer that i activate on top otherwise it wont render even though its in a switch folder... strange...
but here you see her with an "L" mouth
Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 6:17 pm
by jonbo
VERY NICE. Let us know if you need help on the switch layer problem. She is too beautiful to have a lisp.
Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 4:07 am
by neeters_guy
Pretty.
Looks like Ariel's cousin?
Can't wait to see more.
Only suggestion is MAYBE move her ears lower and forward, closer to the back of the jaw, and make her forehead less bulbous, like this:
(Hope you don't mind I used the file you posted earlier to demonstrate. I'll remove the image if you prefer.)
Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 9:51 pm
by JoelMayer
Thanks for the suggestions, i think you're right about the forehead.
Still working on the character. I'm having trouble deciding on a nice design for medieval pants even though i looked at a lot of photographs.
i'll keep ya updated
Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 12:05 am
by Poopee
Forget about what they say, she's got huge knockers, she's perfect.
BOOOOOOBIES!!!!!
Heheh, great work!
Poop