Gwendolyn - First Anime Studio Character

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JoelMayer
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Gwendolyn - First Anime Studio Character

Post by JoelMayer » Thu Jun 02, 2011 5:46 pm

For a fantasy project im building my first Anime Studio Character. so far i think she looks pretty nice ;)

Any critique would be welcome ;)

Thanks!

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Post by jahnocli » Thu Jun 02, 2011 5:49 pm

Looks good! The only change I'd make is to emphasise the curvature of the spine a little more. Her back is ramrod straight -- should be arched backwards a little at the bottom. IMHO.
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Post by jonbo » Thu Jun 02, 2011 5:56 pm

You know I love this character, but the perspective on her collar is a little off. I think the collar on the right( her right) should be a bit smaller or lower than the left. Also, I agree with jahnocli, baby needs back! :D
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Post by JoelMayer » Thu Jun 02, 2011 6:04 pm

okay, more like that?

i also made some switch layers for the mouth now. got a little trouble, because at the moment i always have to move the mouth layer that i activate on top otherwise it wont render even though its in a switch folder... strange...

but here you see her with an "L" mouth ;)

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Post by jonbo » Thu Jun 02, 2011 6:17 pm

VERY NICE. Let us know if you need help on the switch layer problem. She is too beautiful to have a lisp. :wink:
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Post by neeters_guy » Fri Jun 03, 2011 4:07 am

Pretty. :D Looks like Ariel's cousin? :P Can't wait to see more.

Only suggestion is MAYBE move her ears lower and forward, closer to the back of the jaw, and make her forehead less bulbous, like this:

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(Hope you don't mind I used the file you posted earlier to demonstrate. I'll remove the image if you prefer.)
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Post by JoelMayer » Tue Jun 07, 2011 9:51 pm

Thanks for the suggestions, i think you're right about the forehead.

Still working on the character. I'm having trouble deciding on a nice design for medieval pants even though i looked at a lot of photographs.

i'll keep ya updated ;)
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Post by Poopee » Wed Jun 08, 2011 12:05 am

Forget about what they say, she's got huge knockers, she's perfect.

BOOOOOOBIES!!!!!

Heheh, great work! :)

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