Warrior Scar and First Animated Comedy Images

cheyne · Post by **cheyne** » Fri Feb 25, 2011 5:45 am

Nice on the update, the evil guy looks good.

PARKER definitely post your script mate, never hurts to have a few extra eyes looking over your writing

PARKER · Post by **PARKER** » Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:49 am

I will do it soon.
Im not really asking for suggestions, im just showing my work here.
I now the character desings are not impressive, i can do lot more than that, im doing it on porpose, im want to keep every thing simple including the script so its easy to animate.
You will find challenging animation tasks in the script, though

PARKER · Post by **PARKER** » Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:48 am

Ok, i wrote the script first in my native language, now im translating it so here i show you the first 4 pages of it in microsoft word document 97-2003 .doc format:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=T23W43YF

tonyg · Post by **tonyg** » Fri Feb 25, 2011 2:53 pm

Sorry Parker, maybe a silly point but the 'Warrior Scar' character seems to have his feet on the wrong legs.
e.g. big toe on the outside of the foot.
Probably doesn't matter but, after the scar, was the first thing my eyes went to on the first screenshot.

Post by **Víctor Paredes** » Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:02 pm

PARKER wrote:Ok, i wrote the script first in my native language, now im translating it

Can you post the spanish script for all us the lot of spanish speakers of the forum?

Thanks

PARKER · Post by **PARKER** » Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:30 pm

tonyg wrote:Sorry Parker, maybe a silly point but the 'Warrior Scar' character seems to have his feet on the wrong legs.
e.g. big toe on the outside of the foot.
Probably doesn't matter but, after the scar, was the first thing my eyes went to on the first screenshot.

You are right about that, i just realized about it yesterday, its a silly mistake and i will fix it today, thanks for remember it to me.

PARKER · Post by **PARKER** » Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:03 pm

selgin wrote:Can you post the spanish script for all us the lot of spanish speakers of the forum?
Thanks

The first 4 pages of the script in microsoft word document 97-2003 .doc format, english and spanish:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=EBSEMIII

Rudiger · Post by **Rudiger** » Sat Feb 26, 2011 8:11 am

Thanks for sharing these work in progress pictures with us. It looks like it will be truly epic!

Everyone's going to have a different opinion when it comes to style as it's a very personal thing. All an artist can really do is make something that looks good to them. No doubt there will be some evolution as you start animating them, just like what happened to the Simpsons characters over the years.

kellz5460 · Post by **kellz5460** » Sat Feb 26, 2011 8:38 am

storyboards!!!!!!!

thats how to do it...

PARKER · Post by **PARKER** » Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:48 pm

New character i have been working on:

PARKER · Post by **PARKER** » Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:44 am

The first 8 pages of the script in microsoft word document 97-2003 .doc format:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=T23W43YF

PARKER · Post by **PARKER** » Thu Mar 03, 2011 12:56 am

Warrior Scar first Bgs:

ccrock4t · Post by **ccrock4t** » Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:54 am

The white dog-like character looks awesome! I want to watch the animation.

PARKER · Post by **PARKER** » Thu Mar 03, 2011 5:56 am

I will showing my progress everytime i can:

Rudiger · Post by **Rudiger** » Thu Mar 03, 2011 6:49 am

Holy crap! This is looking full-on professional!

I love the wispy cloud effect you got for the sky. It almost looks like broad brush strokes and it's hard to believe it's vector! I'm guessing you made extensive use of AS's brushes to get that effect. Do you cover this specific effect in any of your tutorial, by the way?