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New Episode of Fletcher; made as always on AS 5

Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 12:17 am
by DanFromFaction
Hi Everyone,

This week I tried a new setting.
I did all the drawing in AS, cause I like to be able to manipulate the points.

Enjoy!
http://fletchercomics.com/

Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 2:06 am
by Axlen
Dude! Your Awesome. Thanks again.

Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:31 am
by neeters_guy
You should be writing sitcoms.

Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:36 pm
by Danimal
neeters_guy wrote:You should be writing sitcoms.
No reason to be insulting...

Another great episode!

Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:39 pm
by DanFromFaction
I look at it like I am writing a sitcom! :)

Re: New Episode of Fletcher; made as always on AS 5

Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:48 pm
by tonym
Nice. I especially liked the voice acting.

One criticism. In my opinion, the mechanic should've determined which car was Fletcher's the moment Fletcher walked in, because the mechanic - having completed his trash forensics - would've possessed an eerie knowledge of the car owner's likely age and appearance.

Additionally, had the mechanic identified Fletcher on sight, the beginning would be snappier. If the mechanic would've said, "Oh, right, you're the one with the bucket of soda bottles in the back" the moment Fletcher walked in, you could've trimmed away approximately 14 seconds of somewhat tedious dialogue and gotten to the interesting back-and-forth exchange much sooner.