New Episode of Fletcher; made as always on AS 5

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New Episode of Fletcher; made as always on AS 5

Post by DanFromFaction » Tue Jan 18, 2011 12:17 am

Hi Everyone,

This week I tried a new setting.
I did all the drawing in AS, cause I like to be able to manipulate the points.

Enjoy!
http://fletchercomics.com/
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Post by Axlen » Tue Jan 18, 2011 2:06 am

Dude! Your Awesome. Thanks again.
Bifocals are both wonderful and a PITA.
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Post by neeters_guy » Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:31 am

You should be writing sitcoms.
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Post by Danimal » Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:36 pm

neeters_guy wrote:You should be writing sitcoms.
No reason to be insulting...

Another great episode!
~Danimal
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Post by DanFromFaction » Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:39 pm

I look at it like I am writing a sitcom! :)
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Re: New Episode of Fletcher; made as always on AS 5

Post by tonym » Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:48 pm

Nice. I especially liked the voice acting.

One criticism. In my opinion, the mechanic should've determined which car was Fletcher's the moment Fletcher walked in, because the mechanic - having completed his trash forensics - would've possessed an eerie knowledge of the car owner's likely age and appearance.

Additionally, had the mechanic identified Fletcher on sight, the beginning would be snappier. If the mechanic would've said, "Oh, right, you're the one with the bucket of soda bottles in the back" the moment Fletcher walked in, you could've trimmed away approximately 14 seconds of somewhat tedious dialogue and gotten to the interesting back-and-forth exchange much sooner.
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