You have really captured the over the top kids' commercial in a funny way. :D And I like it when he puts the helmet on the kid. My only suggestion is to condense it more. From about 46 seconds - 1:16 it feels like it drags. Overall, it's got a great pace and is very fun! :)
Thanks for the responses everybody. I appreciate your feedback that it is too long. Your probably right. I probably could have done without the part where he goes a minute explaining what is in the cereal.