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Really not bad. The characters have a strange appeal, part of it being not so perfect. Some points I noticed (personal taste, of course):
- I liked the nerd guy best, it was well balanced in design and animation. Compared to it the girl seemed to be animated too perfectly, also the smooth head turns were irritating. On the contrary, the guy at the end turning his head was not good enough, the head turn looked too amateurish.
- With this thin line style I think it's important to give every character the right amount of detail. The Ninja of the beginning seemed to be too smooth = not enough details.
- The backgrounds are not in balance with the characters yet. I think they'll need much more detail and linework (in the sense of texture), as well as carefully layouted so not to inflict the readability of the characters.
This could become an enjoyable project, maybe a bit in the direction of "Beavis & Butthead" in respect of showing not perfectly streamlined artwork, or even a bit of Mark Beyer.
- I liked the nerd guy best, it was well balanced in design and animation. Compared to it the girl seemed to be animated too perfectly, also the smooth head turns were irritating. On the contrary, the guy at the end turning his head was not good enough, the head turn looked too amateurish.
- With this thin line style I think it's important to give every character the right amount of detail. The Ninja of the beginning seemed to be too smooth = not enough details.
- The backgrounds are not in balance with the characters yet. I think they'll need much more detail and linework (in the sense of texture), as well as carefully layouted so not to inflict the readability of the characters.
This could become an enjoyable project, maybe a bit in the direction of "Beavis & Butthead" in respect of showing not perfectly streamlined artwork, or even a bit of Mark Beyer.
I was aiming for more of a family guy style.
Since it will be a comedy(nothing serious) I wanted to keep it simple,
and I'm kind of confused about animating too perfectly and then not good enough. haha I actually liked the head turned at the end, but to each his own.
Slowtiger: can you give me advice of head turns please? at the moment I am just using debut 6 and I have just been dragging points around. I'm kind of against frame by frame in anime studio, especially because debut has no onion skins, but help on that subject would be much appreciated
Since it will be a comedy(nothing serious) I wanted to keep it simple,
and I'm kind of confused about animating too perfectly and then not good enough. haha I actually liked the head turned at the end, but to each his own.
Slowtiger: can you give me advice of head turns please? at the moment I am just using debut 6 and I have just been dragging points around. I'm kind of against frame by frame in anime studio, especially because debut has no onion skins, but help on that subject would be much appreciated