Hey guys!
Here's the newest cartoon from Nethery-Ramsey Productions!
This is the first Christmas special we've released in two years and I think this one is a vast improvement over the last one.
http://www.nranimation.com/ajchristmas.htm
As I was on a pretty tight deadline I did not spend as much time on the animation as I would've liked but it works for what it is!
Enjoy and MERRY CHRISTMAS 2008 from Nethery-Ramsey Productions!
Average Joe's Christmas Party!
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Hey Spooze I really like the delivery and the animation is just fine, the expression is very convincing and the acting (vocal and animated) I find quite charming.
Happy holly's BTW.
If I could say anything to be constructive,I don't wish to be at all negative, it's regarding two things, design and story. It's like they are the two things you have some cheeky disregard for, as a result I can never make it through these otherwise fine pieces, the ones liners are fine but if they where following some situational direction towards some impending punchline or gag I would find it much easier to stay tuned.
Keep em coming though Spooze, 'cos they do keep getting better and your dedication is admirable.
Happy holly's BTW.
If I could say anything to be constructive,I don't wish to be at all negative, it's regarding two things, design and story. It's like they are the two things you have some cheeky disregard for, as a result I can never make it through these otherwise fine pieces, the ones liners are fine but if they where following some situational direction towards some impending punchline or gag I would find it much easier to stay tuned.
Keep em coming though Spooze, 'cos they do keep getting better and your dedication is admirable.
Thanks and you too!Hey Spooze I really like the delivery and the animation is just fine, the expression is very convincing and the acting (vocal and animated) I find quite charming.
Happy holly's BTW.
Haha yeah. Most of the Average Joe stuff is just silly gag-based stuff with a very thin underlining plot... although this doesn't seem to have much of that eitherIf I could say anything to be constructive,I don't wish to be at all negative, it's regarding two things, design and story. It's like they are the two things you have some cheeky disregard for
This special has a very strange backstory... Brad originally wrote this stuff for a politically-themed movie that we eventually dropped because we wouldn't have been able to get it done on time called Tim for President.
Originally, Joe was throwing a US Election party. Basically, I just went through the original script and changed the whole "greeting scene" to be Christmas themed and Brad went from there and wrote an ending on it.
That's all I'll say about it now but maybe that'll give you a clue on why the story is so disjointed
I'm actually working on developing a series now that is actually story-based... maybe you'll like that style of writing better.
Just out of curiosity... did you make it through this one?as a result I can never make it through these otherwise fine pieces