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Here are a few animations I have done recently:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6vv3dRU38uk

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fiu1k1eZr5U

(collaboration with Luke Weatherill)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWKNAo_h_h0

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vZD_jd5h3Xk

Please Give me some feedback if any guys?

cheers

Hey buddy.
I like 'The Sheriff'. It has a good style. The graphics, color theme and music match well. I didnt get the story well , but still thinks it has some good features. See ya.

btwn, Terminal 5 never loads. Dunno why.

I like how you animated the coiled phone cable in "The Doctors," how it expanded and twisted. And I liked the character designs.

I like how you animated the sun in "Bad Sun." It looked hot! And the plane was nice, the way the wings moved.

I found the dialogue a little hard to understand in "The Doctors" and "Bad Sun." And I didn't 'get' "The Sheriff," but I liked the looks of it.

"Terminal 5" didn't play.

All in all, good work. Maybe be a little funnier and make the dialogue a little easier to understand in subsequent 'toons. If these are amongst your first efforts, you have a lot of potential.

Yeah these are like my first animations