Wow that was great and very funny! Great job with everything!

Pinesal wrote:It was a good idea for a story. I like it. Pacing was a bit slow, but it was better than your last cartoon.

I somewhat agree with you on the pacing. The background music I had made it better. Thanks!

lawnmower70 wrote:I liked it. Thanks for sharing!

Thanks! I'm glad you like it.

Okay, I would like to say Happy Holidays to everyone viewing this. I know it needs work storyline wise but I'm not a writer. I had a vision, I created it, I like it! That's all that matters to me. There was some background music (I Saw Mommy Kissing Santa Claus by The Jackson 5) but I had to take it...

For being as short as it is, it felt surprisingly long. Like "several times looking at the clock to see how much was left" long. The security guard made no sense and should have been deleted. In fact, the whole thing could have started right after the robbery with the robber speeding away...

Danimal wrote:The character desperately needs to go to a doctor pronto. Heads don't turn that far around without damage happening.

Ha ha! But it was a very good attempt!

That guard looks like Rick Ross, haha. I thought it was funny. The running animation looked very smooth, and the back and forth between the hicks was good, it set up the next shot without feeling like it was explicitly telling me "Here's what's about to happen." Good job. Thanks! That rea...

Yo man if you like, I would like to collaborate with you on some things and we can learn together. Yes I am new to the forum and to animation but I think I know enough to help you out. Check out my cartoon and let me know if you are interested in collaborating.

That antibody jokes was pretty clever lol. I need to check out the other two to see the changes or whatnot.

W W THAT... WAS.. AWESOME!!! It looked just like the game.

It was kind of ... inconsequential. The guard was introduced, and then disappeared upwards for some reason. How did the two guys at the bus stop know the van driver was a robber? How come he drove off the cliff? What was the story? If the story is strong, you can forget the clumsy animation. If the...

I was kind of expecting the guard to at least fall on the escaping robber. Many people was wondering what happen to the security gaurd. So I've decided to do a sequel to show what happen. I didn't really expect for people to care so much about the gaurd I guess, but I already have an idea that I th...

I recognize some characters from LRDaToonMan/Kartoon Management; I didn't really catch what was going on though.

Hello everyone! I am new to the forum and fairly new to animating. I'm still observing and learning the art itself. I just wanted to share with you all a recent project I created. I am starting small to build my fan-base and better my craft (animating, story telling, etc). Let me know what you guys ...