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- Sat Apr 22, 2017 12:05 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1565
Re: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
I think the scrip its good, agree with other about the walk cycle, I also note when the rabit show the bear the back and you move the arms the arms order change and look a little weird. Good work, keep improving Thanks! :) There is no layer order changing in animation in the bunny "back" ...
- Wed Apr 19, 2017 4:20 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1565
Re: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
Thanks!strider2000 wrote:Nice job
- Wed Apr 19, 2017 4:18 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: Tales of the peasant cock!
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2344
Re: Tales of the peasant cock!
Thanks man! you too!ekadam wrote:haha ! hello neighbour! i am glad you understood that joke
jokes are greats i think. in my joke you can see pretty bad animation but not bad views! everyone loves jokes! i seen your youtube chanell too it's pretty cool joke chanell, keep up the good work,
- Tue Apr 18, 2017 4:47 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: Tales of the peasant cock!
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2344
Re: Tales of the peasant cock!
thx for the feedbacks :D first of all, i am sorry for my low english skills! the idea was for this tale: make some asinine pointless story, because the location of the tale is asinine shire! so the tale's narrator is also asinine, if you know what i mean! lol so i thought that i dont call help for ...
- Tue Apr 18, 2017 4:22 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1565
Re: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
I think this is brilliant. I have watched it about 5 times. I like the 'bunny' character and the silly voices. The Bear is probably not scary enough, but still OK. Great work. Thank you very much! :) It is hard for me to dub these characters (even bear sounds are made be me :D ), but thanks to audi...
- Tue Apr 18, 2017 4:10 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1565
Re: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
Thanks! Yes, the walk cycle could be better, i have to learn to do it better And the lips synch i do manualy, step by step, because its look better that automaticaly created oneGaenhart wrote:good work. Not sure about the walk cycle at the beginning, but the lips synch works well.
- Mon Apr 17, 2017 11:11 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: Tales of the peasant cock!
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2344
Re: Tales of the peasant cock!
Hi, i like the style, the map, the colors, characters, music, sounds, animations... but whats the point? it has to be funny? or something ecological? btw, how u do the narrator? it is a program?
- Mon Apr 17, 2017 11:00 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1565
☺ A bear lesson ☺
Just another small joke
Guys, do you think that "false" laughter is good in jokes? btw, do you know some good free audio library? or a program that reads what you write?
thank you in advance for your advice
Guys, do you think that "false" laughter is good in jokes? btw, do you know some good free audio library? or a program that reads what you write?
thank you in advance for your advice
- Fri Apr 14, 2017 12:39 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3047
Re: ☺ The Snail joke
It must be kismet, or something. Been working on this guy since last month, on and off. There's not even a joke here, just a head turn (which took too darn long to complete). Thinking of incorporating him into a longer animation. Fun fact: Snails have been around since before the dinosaurs. 2129926...
- Sun Apr 09, 2017 5:10 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3047
Re: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
Wow thats awesome i love snail jokes I subscribe !Ghe Adacor wrote:Welcome to the snail animation world ) https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC3Jsqj ... ETvzPAcTSg
- Sat Apr 08, 2017 3:28 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3047
Re: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
Yes it is! well thank you!Greenlaw wrote:Oh, I also meant to add:
Congratulations on getting the short done! That's always a good feeling, isn't it?
- Thu Apr 06, 2017 11:23 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3047
Re: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
You could try showing the passage of time visually, as well. Perhaps have the snail crawling slowly back towards the door while whole years pass in the background (winter-> spring-> summer-> fall, and then back to winter, over and over again). That with the changing seasons is a very cool idea :) !...
- Thu Apr 06, 2017 11:16 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
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Re: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
I thought it was kinda funny. But, anybody who's read my comics or seen my short films already knows, I like dumb jokes. :) Personally, I think the gag is fine, but I agree with some of the above comments that timing/pacing could be improved. You probably shouldn't use the word 'joke' in the title ...
- Thu Apr 06, 2017 11:08 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3047
Re: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
this from a long time ago is on a similar theme.... you might get some inspiration from it.. http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p196/barn26owl/20980_image_zpswsca0g0h.gif Hi hayasidist, good one :D and thanks for inspiration! :) i can imagine this as an animation :) In our country (Slovakia), we ha...
- Thu Apr 06, 2017 11:01 pm
- Forum: Share Your Work
- Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
- Replies: 20
- Views: 3047
Re: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
In therms of animation, I think it's nice and has a good rhythm. It would be good to have some anticipations and holds. About the joke, I think it's one of that jokes that aren't too funny, but the way you show them can make them funny. This is important, also, because the way you orally tell a jok...