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by JanR90
Sat Apr 22, 2017 12:05 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
Replies: 8
Views: 908

Re: ☺ A bear lesson ☺

I think the scrip its good, agree with other about the walk cycle, I also note when the rabit show the bear the back and you move the arms the arms order change and look a little weird. Good work, keep improving Thanks! :) There is no layer order changing in animation in the bunny "back" scene, may...
by JanR90
Wed Apr 19, 2017 4:20 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
Replies: 8
Views: 908

Re: ☺ A bear lesson ☺

strider2000 wrote:Nice job :)
Thanks! :)
by JanR90
Wed Apr 19, 2017 4:18 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Tales of the peasant cock!
Replies: 9
Views: 1265

Re: Tales of the peasant cock!

ekadam wrote:haha :D ! hello neighbour! i am glad you understood that joke :D
jokes are greats i think. in my joke you can see pretty bad animation but not bad views! everyone loves jokes! i seen your youtube chanell too it's pretty cool joke chanell, keep up the good work,
Thanks man! :) you too!
by JanR90
Tue Apr 18, 2017 4:47 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Tales of the peasant cock!
Replies: 9
Views: 1265

Re: Tales of the peasant cock!

thx for the feedbacks :D first of all, i am sorry for my low english skills! the idea was for this tale: make some asinine pointless story, because the location of the tale is asinine shire! so the tale's narrator is also asinine, if you know what i mean! lol so i thought that i dont call help for ...
by JanR90
Tue Apr 18, 2017 4:22 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
Replies: 8
Views: 908

Re: ☺ A bear lesson ☺

I think this is brilliant. I have watched it about 5 times. I like the 'bunny' character and the silly voices. The Bear is probably not scary enough, but still OK. Great work. Thank you very much! :) It is hard for me to dub these characters (even bear sounds are made be me :D ), but thanks to audi...
by JanR90
Tue Apr 18, 2017 4:10 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
Replies: 8
Views: 908

Re: ☺ A bear lesson ☺

Gaenhart wrote:good work. Not sure about the walk cycle at the beginning, but the lips synch works well.
Thanks! :) Yes, the walk cycle could be better, i have to learn to do it better :) And the lips synch i do manualy, step by step, because its look better that automaticaly created one :)
by JanR90
Mon Apr 17, 2017 11:11 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Tales of the peasant cock!
Replies: 9
Views: 1265

Re: Tales of the peasant cock!

Hi, i like the style, the map, the colors, characters, music, sounds, animations... but whats the point? it has to be funny? or something ecological? :D btw, how u do the narrator? it is a program? :?:
by JanR90
Mon Apr 17, 2017 11:00 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: ☺ A bear lesson ☺
Replies: 8
Views: 908

☺ A bear lesson ☺

Just another small joke :D

Guys, do you think that "false" laughter is good in jokes? btw, do you know some good free audio library? or a program that reads what you write? :?:
thank you in advance for your advice :idea: :D

by JanR90
Fri Apr 14, 2017 12:39 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
Replies: 20
Views: 2019

Re: ☺ The Snail joke

It must be kismet, or something. Been working on this guy since last month, on and off. There's not even a joke here, just a head turn (which took too darn long to complete). Thinking of incorporating him into a longer animation. Fun fact: Snails have been around since before the dinosaurs. 2129926...
by JanR90
Sun Apr 09, 2017 5:10 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
Replies: 20
Views: 2019

Re: ☺ The Snail joke ☺

Ghe Adacor wrote:Welcome to the snail animation world :)) https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC3Jsqj ... ETvzPAcTSg
Wow thats awesome :) i love snail jokes :D I subscribe !
by JanR90
Sat Apr 08, 2017 3:28 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
Replies: 20
Views: 2019

Re: ☺ The Snail joke ☺

Greenlaw wrote:Oh, I also meant to add:

Congratulations on getting the short done! That's always a good feeling, isn't it? :)
Yes it is! well thank you! :wink:
by JanR90
Thu Apr 06, 2017 11:23 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
Replies: 20
Views: 2019

Re: ☺ The Snail joke ☺

You could try showing the passage of time visually, as well. Perhaps have the snail crawling slowly back towards the door while whole years pass in the background (winter-> spring-> summer-> fall, and then back to winter, over and over again). That with the changing seasons is a very cool idea :) !...
by JanR90
Thu Apr 06, 2017 11:16 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
Replies: 20
Views: 2019

Re: ☺ The Snail joke ☺

I thought it was kinda funny. But, anybody who's read my comics or seen my short films already knows, I like dumb jokes. :) Personally, I think the gag is fine, but I agree with some of the above comments that timing/pacing could be improved. You probably shouldn't use the word 'joke' in the title ...
by JanR90
Thu Apr 06, 2017 11:08 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
Replies: 20
Views: 2019

Re: ☺ The Snail joke ☺

this from a long time ago is on a similar theme.... you might get some inspiration from it.. http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p196/barn26owl/20980_image_zpswsca0g0h.gif Hi hayasidist, good one :D and thanks for inspiration! :) i can imagine this as an animation :) In our country (Slovakia), we ha...
by JanR90
Thu Apr 06, 2017 11:01 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: ☺ The Snail joke ☺
Replies: 20
Views: 2019

Re: ☺ The Snail joke ☺

In therms of animation, I think it's nice and has a good rhythm. It would be good to have some anticipations and holds. About the joke, I think it's one of that jokes that aren't too funny, but the way you show them can make them funny. This is important, also, because the way you orally tell a jok...